Note: The quality of vocabulary in this essay is particularly high – above band 9.
Writing Task 2: The best essay structure
In this lesson we compare three possible ways to structure a 4-paragraph essay. Let me know which way you prefer.
Model essay: Foreign language problems
Here’s another band 9 sample answer with essay plan and a quick vocabulary exercise.
Full essay: Traffic congestion
Here’s another band 9 sample answer with my essay plan and a quick vocabulary exercise.
Full essay: Best time to be alive
Here’s my band 9 sample answer for the ‘best time to be alive’ question, plus a quick vocabulary exercise.
Writing Task 2: Finish the paragraph
In this lesson we look at a more coherent plan for the “best time to be alive” question, and we start writing a paragraph for homework.
Writing Task 2: A more coherent outline
In this lesson we look at a more coherent plan for the “best time to be alive” question, and we start writing a paragraph for homework.
IELTS Writing Task 2: Overall coherence
By improving the overall coherence or ‘harmony’ of our paragraphs, we can turn a good essay into an excellent piece of writing.
Best time to be alive essay ‘skeleton’
Let’s look at a possible essay skeleton for the ‘Best time to be alive’ question.
Vocabulary review exercise
Try this quick exercise that encourages you to review some key words and phrases from the last week of lessons here on the member site.
Writing task 2: Improving a paragraph
In this lesson we look at how a student’s paragraph could be improved.
Writing task 2: ‘Best time to be alive’ question
Some people say that now is the best time in history to be alive. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
Advanced Cohesion
Have you read the band 9 descriptor for coherence and cohesion? It says the same thing for both writing task 1 and writing task 2.
Sentence pairs analysis
Let’s take a closer look at the “sentence pairs” in the essay about self-employment that I shared last week.
Two-part essay: Self-employment
Here’s my band 9 sample answer for the self-employment question that we’ve been working on. Make a list of the best phrases and collocations that I used.
Writing Advice: Sentence ‘pairs’
Writing “pairs” of sentences encourages you to develop coherent ideas, add detail, and use different cohesive devices (linking).
Essay writing: 13 sentence jobs
When you have a 13-sentence plan, it’s easy to write your essay. Just write a full sentence for each of the 13 points.
Essay planning: 13 Sentences method
Here’s a different way to plan an essay. Perhaps you will prefer this method over the normal note-taking or brainstorming approaches.
When should you give your opinion?
Some essay questions ask for your opinion but others don’t. Make sure you only give your opinion when the question asks fo it.
Writing task 2: ‘Self employed’ question
Let’s start work on a new essay question. This one is about self-employment and it comes from Cambridge IELTS 14.
Writing task 2: model ‘problem and solution’ essay
Here’s another band 9 sample answer with my essay plan and a list of band 7-9 vocabulary.
Writing Advice: Using model sentences
Here’s a different way to practise sentence grammar.
Writing task 2: Sentences have ‘jobs’
In this lesson I want to return to the idea that each sentence in your essay should do a particular job.
Writing task 2: Better linking
Most students learn simple linking words, like Furthermore or However. But did you know that there are other, more sophisticated ways to link your ideas?
Writing task 2: ‘owning or renting’ essay
Here’s another band 9 sample answer with my essay plan and a quick study task.
Comparing 3 types of paragraph
Let’s compare 3 types of main body paragraph: the one-idea paragraph, the two-idea paragraph, and the three-idea paragraph.
Alternatives to ‘firstly, secondly, finally’
Whenever I write a paragraph using ‘firstly, secondly, finally’, people ask me whether there are any good alternatives to these linking words.
Full essay: Learning a musical instrument
Here’s my full essay for the question about learning a musical instrument.
Writing Task 2: benefits of learning music
In this lesson I’m going to show you my first main body paragraph for the essay question about learning a musical instrument.
The ‘Essay Skeleton’
I use the term ‘essay skeleton’ to refer to the main structural elements, or ‘bones’, of an essay. This lesson shows you an example.