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Model essay: Music and arts

Note: The quality of vocabulary in this essay is particularly high – above band 9.

Full essay: Best time to be alive

Here’s my band 9 sample answer for the ‘best time to be alive’ question, plus a quick vocabulary exercise.

Writing Task 2: Finish the paragraph

In this lesson we look at a more coherent plan for the “best time to be alive” question, and we start writing a paragraph for homework.

Writing Task 2: A more coherent outline

In this lesson we look at a more coherent plan for the “best time to be alive” question, and we start writing a paragraph for homework.

IELTS Writing Task 2: Overall coherence

By improving the overall coherence or ‘harmony’ of our paragraphs, we can turn a good essay into an excellent piece of writing.

Vocabulary review exercise

Try this quick exercise that encourages you to review some key words and phrases from the last week of lessons here on the member site.

Advanced Cohesion

Have you read the band 9 descriptor for coherence and cohesion? It says the same thing for both writing task 1 and writing task 2.

Sentence pairs analysis

Let’s take a closer look at the “sentence pairs” in the essay about self-employment that I shared last week.

Two-part essay: Self-employment

Here’s my band 9 sample answer for the self-employment question that we’ve been working on. Make a list of the best phrases and collocations that I used.

Writing Advice: Sentence ‘pairs’

Writing “pairs” of sentences encourages you to develop coherent ideas, add detail, and use different cohesive devices (linking).

Essay writing: 13 sentence jobs

When you have a 13-sentence plan, it’s easy to write your essay. Just write a full sentence for each of the 13 points.

Essay planning: 13 Sentences method

Here’s a different way to plan an essay. Perhaps you will prefer this method over the normal note-taking or brainstorming approaches.

When should you give your opinion?

Some essay questions ask for your opinion but others don’t. Make sure you only give your opinion when the question asks fo it.

Writing task 2: Better linking

Most students learn simple linking words, like Furthermore or However. But did you know that there are other, more sophisticated ways to link your ideas?

Comparing 3 types of paragraph

Let’s compare 3 types of main body paragraph: the one-idea paragraph, the two-idea paragraph, and the three-idea paragraph.

The ‘Essay Skeleton’

I use the term ‘essay skeleton’ to refer to the main structural elements, or ‘bones’, of an essay. This lesson shows you an example.